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Valgor
12-06-2012, 06:11 AM
v. 1.000 :

- The explosion radius of several weapon components (bombs for example) is missing the "unit" measurement.

- In the Gleria shipyard description, "Most victims [...] do not understand the danger until too late- [...]" should be "Most victims [...] do not understand the danger until it's too late- [...]"

- In the Strange Matter Doomsday Weapon flavour text, "[...] and trasforms anything it touches [...]" should be "[...] and transforms anything it touches [...]"

- The plural of "Seeping Schistos" should be just "Seeping Schistos", not "Seeping Schistoss"

Roswitha
12-14-2012, 04:50 PM
The last line should be "Destroy him before he starts trouble."

Valgor
12-14-2012, 06:24 PM
The last line should be "Destroy him before he starts trouble."

Actually, it should be "Destroy them before they start trouble.", since Telsert is a ship, and therefore neutral.

Roswitha
12-14-2012, 08:02 PM
Or possibly "Destroy it before it starts trouble," since a ship is singular.

Valgor
01-07-2013, 06:41 AM
The wealth of Wandering Vendors is misaligned.

Valgor
02-07-2013, 06:34 AM
"We want to kill them the old fashion way" should be "We want to kill them the old-fashioned way" .